User:KenAcoustic/sandbox

Proposed cleanup edits
Dear Editors,

There are a few inaccuracies I'd like to suggest we fix, and a recent development I think we should add to the article:


 * In the Truck driver seat isolation system section I'd like to change the subtitle from "Truck driver seat isolation system" to "Seat suspension system for truck drivers" to reflect how it is referred to in the media and on the Bose website. This change is also is consistent with how the Bose automotive suspension system is referred to in the article and in the media.


 * In the L1 Portable Systems section the "Professional Systems Division" is incorrectly referred to at the "Commercial Systems Division", which does not exist at Bose. The Pro division is correctly referenced immediately above and I would simply like to make the correction in the L1 section.


 * In the Electroforce section I would like to add the following sentence. "In May of 2015, Bose announced that TA Instruments had acquired the assets of the Bose Electroforce Group

I think these are all very straightforward. Please let me know if there any objections or suggested changes.

Thanks.

KenAcoustic (talk) 20:16, 17 August 2015 (UTC)