User:KenKardashin/List of Ice Age species preserved as permafrost mummies/Daisysandpeaches Peer Review

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(provide username) KenKardashin
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 * List of Ice Age species preserved as permafrost mummies:

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Good addition! The content added was necessary for fully understanding why these mummies are such a big deal! You could even take it one step further and give details on how often organisms are preserved/how often a discovery is made.

Play around with the wording more, it's a little confusing. Try to be more concise. This sentence in particular was throwing off the flow, here's my suggestion:

"With such a complete preservation process of tissues, it is possible to determine numerous things from the samples that you could with modern tissues such as: DNA, eDNA evolutionary history, gut contents, and predator-prey dynamics."

*** The "too" in the last sentence of the first paragraph should be a "to". -noticed in the original wiki page

I think it'd be nice to have some sort of indication as to which species are extinct and extant :)