User:KendallDonna/Coral bleaching/KenDawg123 Peer Review

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(KendallDonna)
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The article had 2 pictures added to it by Kendall Donna, a picture of an example marine protected area sign, and a diagram of how ocean acidification is caused. The picture of the protected area sign, adds to the description to the MPA section, and helps people have a visual representation of what the signs looks like. WIth all the pictures the article has, it pulls everything together with another picture to explain. She also added a diagram of how ocean acidification happens. This is remarkably helpful, because it not only adds a visual representation of what happens, but it also helps people get a visual and readable explanation. Some learn better with words while others need a diagram to reference. Citations match the picture well. The images also match the the article and article theme perfectly. The content is relevant and up to date and very neutral, for it its a picture that is stating a fact. I feel as if the pictures pull the article all together as well. Nothing seems out of place, I do think without the picture it would be more out of place, given the amount of pictures already in the article.