User:KeneliaWilliams/Obeah/DaltonSchultz Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? KeneliaWilliams
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Obeah

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes it has.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes it does.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? no, but it is an a section of an article. meaning it did not try to add a new section.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?no it does not.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? the lead is to the point.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes I believe so.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes it is.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Not to my knowledge.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? IT displays a neutral point.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? None.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? None.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No it does not.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes it is.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes they do.
 * Are the sources current? Two of the three pieces are less than ten years old.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes they do.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? IT is easy to read.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? One spelling error in the second paragraph the word serve has two S's.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? It is a single section, but broken into smaller paragraphs.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Doesn't add a picture.
 * Are images well-captioned? N/a
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? N/a
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? N/a

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? Yes it does.
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? Her addition does use all her sources.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Added inside an existing part so not much to change.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? No added links.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? The article does add a comparison which does help the article.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Comparing it to Jamaica helps understanding it.
 * How can the content added be improved? Just adding more information all together.

Overall evaluation
Good start to editing an article.