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Article Evaluation


 * The ordering of the life cycle and reproduction is off for the Drosophila melanogaster
 * The article should start off with reproduction and not temperature of how long it may take for the eggs to mature
 * Should be order as Females, males, how they reproduce, lay eggs, and then about the temperatures of the eggs and how long they take to mature in their given temperature.
 * All the information appears to be relevant the ordering seems to off with some of the sections.
 * History of the flies should be first and their importance should be at the top as well because that could hook someone into reading the article
 * The article does not appear to have any clear bias
 * The misconception section should not be given a section at all
 * No one really cares about their flight patterns and this should possibly removed at some point or added to another section
 * And the section called "As a Pest" should also be removed or added to another section
 * The links seem to be in working order and the ones I clicked are peer reviewed articles
 * No biases are seen too clearly
 * The talk page has not had much chatter in a while. The last big talk was between the years 2007-2009