User:Kennaalexus/Softball/Azharsumar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kennaalexus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Softball


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Softball

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job adding to the sections of the article and making new sections. I think what could help your article was Including in text citations. By adding in text citations, it would make it easier for people reading your article to understand where you got your Information from. For example, when you added the section What to Focus on and What to Avoid, the information added to the heading sounds like you just created that information without any information without another link. I think it would help if you added a link to where the information came from. This would be helpful for readers to understand where you got the information from. I think the information that is in the tips and rules section is good. It talks about the different types such as fast pitch and slow pitch. This section does a good job of distinguishing the differences between slow pitch and fast pitch softball. The only thing I think that would really help your article would be adding in text citations, besides that, your article is very well written.