User:Kennaalexus/Softball/Mikedenezza14 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Kennaalexus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kennaalexus/Softball
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Softball
 * Softball

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)