User:KennethCaslib/Illnesses and Issues: California Gold Rush/RyanVpacific Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing

Kenneth Caslib


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KennethCaslib/Illnesses_and_Issues:_California_Gold_Rush?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KennethCaslib/Illnesses_and_Issues:_California_Gold_Rush?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
First thing I noticed is that there is no references to any information. Did you use any references for your work? Can possibly add onto the Chinese Exclusion act part of your wikipage. You should change the word "unsanitariness" to unhealthy environment. Great flow between all your sentences and easy to follow. Really good at bringing up facts for your topic. Nice job.