User:Kenneth Ugalde/Joanna Manganara

"Joanna Manganara is a Greek diplomat, women's rights activist, from 2013 to 2020 she was the President of the International Alliance of Women (IAW,) which is the oldest still-existing international women's organization."

The beginning of the sentence should read: "Joanna Manganara is a Greek diplomat and women's rights activist;..."

The source provides basic information on Joanna Manganara, but is still considerably underdeveloped and contains grammatical errors. This is exemplified through he article's overuse of "she is also", instead the article should include other transitions to introduce what she participated in.