User:Kensey Smith/Max Wachtel/BlueSkies18 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Background

Majors shouldn't be capitalized (unless they're a proper noun like English)

doctorate degree NOT Doctorate's degree

"One of the many reasons as to why Wachtel became interested in criminal forensic psychology [is] an interview he had with LPC and author, Kristen Brunner". - You've already stated that it is one of the reasons. One reason does not include anything else.

Career

"He believes that showing the courtroom that people are human beings who sometimes make bad choices or their childhood [as] an indicator of wrongdoing can offer a greater perspective that is not limited to merely black or white thinking while also keeping justice at the forefront".

I think you did a fabulous job at remaining neutral throughout your article. You have a pretty strong hook and the article is well-organized and a good read. Your content is applicable and up-to-date and your sources are great (as far as I can tell)