User:KenzeeF/Hamus (archaea)/Antfazz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KenzeeF


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KenzeeF/Hamus_%28archaea%29?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very easy to read and maintains a neutral/informative standpoint. Great organization, paragraphs flow well. This article not only includes a lot of sources, but it incorporates them all well into one flowing passage. Rather than compiling info from one source in one paragraph and info from another source in another paragraph, the writers do a great job of scattering in the info they learned from their many different sources. Sources are also reliable, relevant, and recent, and links worked.

General info is given and I assume the group will go further into detail for amoeba appendages and their different functionalities. I think it would be helpful to have a larger focus on Hamus, and potentially introduce it in the lead section.