User:KenzeeF/Hamus (archaea)/LexiKoplin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KenzeeF


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KenzeeF/Hamus_%28archaea%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - It is easy to understand and concise but I feel like it is more focused on archaea and not Hamus. You could add to the lead the specific sections that will be discussed. You should define what hamus is.

The content gives you a good background knowledge of Archaea. It is represented equally and is not one sided.

Sources are up to date and current. The links does allow for the reader to continue to research the topic.

You can add images to the article to help with understanding of what hamus is. It is a good start but more focus on hamus instead of archaea would be great to add. Defining what is hamus, what is the function of hams, and benefits of it.