User:Kenzzippel/Zoë Wicomb/Katie McCabe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ATlakehead JWSV Kenzzippel and RNNewman1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Zoë Wicomb


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Zoë Wicomb

Evaluate the drafted changes
At this time I cannot see any information that has been added to the already existing article. I do not know if that is user error (my fault) or not. However, I will comment on the state of the article as I have linked above. Overall the article has good solid information on Zoe Wicomb with a ton of links. The tone of the article is quite neutral and there are no instances of persuasion that I can see. I would suggest making the lead of the article a bit stronger as it is only a few sentences long. Another suggestion would be at the end of the article where it states specific awards she's has won or has been nominated for, it might be nice to link those awards to their websites if possible? So people can look up the nature of the award and essentially what it entails! Overall good start and I look forward to reading the finished project.