User:Kermitdawormit/Dougong/Flightless Burd Peer Review

General info
Kermitdawormit
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kermitdawormit/Dougong?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dougong:
 * Dougong:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content:

All the information is relevant and up to date.

Tone and Balance:

The tone of the edits is unbiased and informative. The information presented is clear and easy to read. There isn't any "implied" facts or suggestions.

Sources and References:

Added plenty of references. However there isn't a clear reference connected to the information added in the Earthquake Resistance section.

Overall Impressions:

It was hard for me to tell the difference between the information he added to the article and the information previously there. This a great indicator that the article edits/contributions were in align with Wikipedia's guidelines and expectations.