User:Kermitdawormit/Dougong/Jarmstro1208 Peer Review

General info
Kermitdawormit
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kermitdawormit/Dougong?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Dougong

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The lead has been lengthened and built upon to add more information. It introduces the topic along with a small bit of history about the subject before getting into specifics in each subsequent section. The article gives a good amount of information for a quick read.

Content:

I am pleased to say that the content of dougong is up to date and relevant, as well as interesting to read with no prior knowledge of the subject. I personally liked learning about how dougong became more ornamental overtime as structure became more stable, I enjoy learning about architecture that has more visually artistic value to it. User Kermitdawormit has added 2 new sections to the article, Development and cultural implications and Earthquake resistance, as well as expanding upon the previous section of Function. The tone within all of these sections are neutral and unbiased, making more a very informational read. The only thing I might change for organization would be that the Earthquake resistance section might be able to fit within the Function section as a sub-category, otherwise it is well presented and no grammatical errors were notices as well. There are plenty of images as well to go along with what is being said, however image layout could be changed, as they are all over on the right side only, making it not very visually interesting (something my own article could use as well).

Overall this is a very informative and interesting article that is well written and presented, very good job.