User:Kevahcoles/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Comprehensive sex education

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it is a topic we have touched on in class that I have found interesting. It matters because sex education in our school system greatly needs to be improved, and having more information about comprehensive sex education can help do that. My first impression of the article was not the best, since in the first sentence there seems to be an attempt to edit using code that was not done correctly.

Evaluate the article
The first paragraph of this article can be improved. There is a mistake in the first sentence made when editing the source code and the paragraph itself is a little confusing to read. The content of this article is backed up well with good sources, however it feels biased at times. The tone makes the reader believe the author prefers comprehensive sex education over abstinence-only sex education. The talk page rates the article a C, and shows me that other students in education courses have worked on the article. It is underdeveloped, but well on its way to being a good article.