User:KevinAbbondanza/Naima Jillal/Julianpig15 Peer Review

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Group one did a good job about introducing Namia Jillal AKA as the Aunt. She was a cocaine trafficker who worked for Mustapha EI Fechtali's. They did a good job about giving back story into here background and they also explained where her remains are. The only thing I would recommend would be to move the citations all the way to the bottom in the reference section.

Content section

They have relevant and up to date information about the topic. They do a good job about giving information about what she did to lead up to Naimia Jellal investigation. After the sectance about the lost cocaine from Costa Rica that paragraph is a little confusing about who killed who. So if you could explain who Hakim Changachi is.

the conclusion part about Naima Jillal that she was confirmed dead was pretty self explanatory.

I would just add a reference part under everything so it easy and accessible to see where you guys got your work from.

I thought the overall wiki page was very good and informative. There was a lot of information on the page that I never knew about and I learned alot about Naima Jillal. The only area that could be fixed up would be adding sources and the organization of how the different cartels were under the criminal career part but besides that it was really good.