User:KevinSantosKS/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Black Feminism

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because we recently discussed the impact that former slaves such as Sojourner Truth had on the feminist movement as a whole which is something I really found interesting.

Evaluate the article

 * Second paragraph could be reorganized to another section of the article because it isn't as important as the other paragraphs in the introduction.
 * It presents a quote of someone's argument rather than giving background information about the history of Black feminism as a whole.
 * Third paragraph could have a colon after "According to Black feminism" to make the sentence less confusing.
 * In the same paragraph, "bell hooks" should be capitalized to "Bell Hooks" as, being the name of a person, it is a proper noun.
 * Paragraph's should be moved to a different section due to its argumentative tone.
 * Use of the word "currency" is unnecessary, "popularity" would suffice
 * Use of the word "peculiar institution" in "Early History" section should include a footnote to another wikipedia article or source that gives reader background information on what "peculiar institution" refers to
 * Use of the phrase "primary dominating differentiation" is doing too much
 * Entire "Early History" section is argumentative. Author is making their own argument rather than discussing the arguments of the authors they mention.