User:KeyHole22/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Lie

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose the article because the topic of lying interests me. It matters because lying can be very dangerous when used incorrectly. When people use it properly, the result might sound bad on paper on, but in actuality it might be good for both parties involved in the lie. I was expecting the the brutal truth. What I mean by that is that I was expecting what is lying and what are some ways lying is used in life.

Evaluate the article
The article had many good and bad aspects about it. To start with the lead, the article gets straight to the point on what a lie is. I would have liked if the lead though was a bit more descriptive instead of just giving a textbook definition of the word. They do though preview the rest of the article in the lead which I found quite helpful. The article needs to be updated because the concept of lying is ever changing and its terms are too. I like how it is structured and how they give you the associated terms with how lying is setup. The article is composed of images throughout it that go with terms or people that are being discussed in a particular section. Overall, this article was good on giving a good lead and providing a numerous amount of content about the concept of lying. It can improve by expanding on the lead and updating the information in the article to use more relevant sources.