User:Kf7tgy22/Ferroportin/ScholarJay Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kf7tgy22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kf7tgy22/Ferroportin/Bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ferroportin

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the direction your updates to the article are heading. I think there is good, relevant information. One thing that I would consider changing (which you may have been planning to change once you linked the appropriate article) is the following: Original text: "... as described in the Hepcidin article" Possible revision: '... as described by Author's Name et al. ' (Add link).  I think this is going to be an excellent article! ScholarJay (talk) 22:47, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

What I am assuming is your final draft (the most current edits you'll be adding) is nothing short of impressive! There is a lot of detailed, yet clear, information that is very relevant to ferroportin. Your references look good, and all your Wiki links are appropriately constructed. Seeing that this article is secondary to your article on hepcidin, I think this is definitely sufficient and helpful. I can say with certainty that you've improved the article significantly. Good work! ScholarJay (talk) 18:05, 7 December 2022 (UTC)