User:Kf7tgy22/Hepcidin/ScholarJay Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kf7tgy22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kf7tgy22/Hepcidin/Bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hepcidin

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the points you bring up are good, especially those that tie the function of hepcidin to ferroportin. The notes you've left indicating the direction of future edits are good and helpful. Also, I think that the diagram will be an excellent addition to the article and will really make it stand out. It looks good so far! ScholarJay (talk) 22:50, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

The content you have added to the article is, for lack of a better word, great! The image that you added is definitely helpful and relevant; I'm glad that you were able to get permission from the author to add it! I particularly am impressed by the resources that you've added. A specific addition you made that I thought was beneficial was the connection to medical application (symptoms of a disorder, anemia). I think that all modifications to the article are appropriate and correctly follow the blueprint delineated in the peer review rubric as well. Great work, as always! ScholarJay (talk) 18:14, 7 December 2022 (UTC)