User:Kfreda/Weathering hypothesis/ReedNatalie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kfreda


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kfreda/Weathering hypothesis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This looks really good! Didn't see spelling or grammar issues. I would just make sure that every sentence has a source citing it. Really good information, very clear and concise. You did a good job f not being biased in your writing and backing everything up with facts.