User:Kfsimerau/Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act/Devinyousif Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kfsimerau


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kfsimerau/Health_Insurance_Portability_and_Accountability_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article explains what the bill is about and how it became to be a bill. It goes in depth on what went into the bill and who was behind it. I liked that there was legislative information added to the article. If I had to suggest anything being added to the article, I'd suggest that the writer should add in more information like hearings, meetings, etc. about the bill and also state how many people would be effected by HIPPA when it came to become a reality. One thing I noticed in the article is the legislative hearings. I liked that it was added in and would definitely add that into my article as well!