User:Kgaly2/Yellow-chevroned parakeet/Asku7 Peer Review

Article you are reviewing: Yellow-chevroned parakeet

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Kgaly2
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Hi! I think your information on the yellow-chevroned parakeet's diet was informational and full of factual information. I think that maybe you may could add a couple words or so on how their diet is physiologically beneficial (like how you stated in your paragraph). I also think that maybe a broad opening sentence, bringing all your ideas together, could help introduce the paragraph a little better. Maybe something like: Yellow-chevroned parakeets have a unique diet compared to other species of parakeets", since you mentioned that they are the only species to eat out of the termite nests.

I enjoyed reading your addition to your Wiki page!