User:Kgaly2/Yellow-chevroned parakeet/Cassidypoodle Peer Review

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 * Yellow-chevroned parakeet :

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Yellow-chevroned parakeets are believed to be the first parakeet species to consume arboreal termite nests, which occurs when they are digging holes in the nests and they consume a mixture of clay, organic matter, feces, and saliva (Costa-Pereira, et al.). The termite nests provide more physiological benefits compared to ordinary ground soil, which includes organic matter and other macronutrients, like Potassium, Magnesium, and Aluminum (Costa-Pereira, et al.). Yellow-chevroned parakeets also consume various flowers, fruits, pulp, and seeds with palms and Bombacaceae, which are commonly known as Silk cotton trees, being to most popular choice for the parakeet(Paranhos).

- What do you mean by first? First discovered? They began to do this first?

- style correction: first parakeet species to feed on arboreal termite nests, consuming a mixture of clay, organic matter, feces, and saliva.

- style correction: Compared to ordinary ground soil, these nests provide more macronutrients, such as potassium, magnesium, and aluminum.

-style correction and placement: The majority of the Yellow-chevroned parakeet's diet consists of various flowers, fruits, and seeds from Silk cotton trees. (I would place this sentence at the beginning of the paragraph.)