User:Kgroft/Day Zero/Chainthasher Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Kgroft


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kgroft/Day_Zero?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it would be helpful to your article to provide information as to how Robots became a integral part of society, namely their social structure seeing as they have "heirs". I do not think you need to provide a ton of information, just enough to allow the reader of the article to understand the place of robots within society. Since you are also creating an article from scratch (at least from my understanding), you could also provide a heading which lists minor/major characters and their relevance to the story. I do think you could reorder your summary (provide information about the rebellion more so the beginning than the end). Additionally, within your summary did a good job of maintaining a neutral stance and did not state any potential spoilers. I believe you also provided good sources, and you could link them to the end of the specific sentences that cite your source's information. However, one thing I will say is that your sources do seem to be more so a synopsis of the book which was likely provided by the publishing company for sales rather than information about the themes or development. Seeing as this book does not already have a Wikipedia page I would imagine that the book is not well known. I think these sources are completely fine for a new Wikipedia page, but I would consider adding one article talking more in depth about the story.