User:Kgt11/Atypical Anorexia/Rac150 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kgt11, VelenWu, GraceRademacher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kgt11/Atypical_Anorexia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Super great article so far, it's surprising that there isn't a page for this yet! The information you have so far seems to be unbiased and provides a good overview of atypical anorexia.

Citations are needed for signs and symptoms section, but otherwise citations look good! I don't know if each symptom needs a citation, but you definitely need something cited in that intro paragraph and maybe on the headers for the two types of symptoms? Should be pretty easy to provide a link to the dsm-5 or whatever source you're using! Y'all also seem to rely on one source a lot, but I'm sure that will change as you add more to your work.

I think each section needs more in it, especially the history section. Maybe look into how and why it was finally added? There are probably sources from around the time it was finally added that talk about it, maybe news archives could be good to check out? I think treatment and epidemiology could also be a good way to branch out sources and flesh out the article. You also mentioned secondary side effects in your treatment section, would that go under signs and symptoms as well? Overall this is really good and it's so cool that y'all are adding a new article! What you have looks really great aside from the citations issue in symptoms, I would just say keep adding more to your work as you research.