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Article Evaluation of Alaska Native languages

I do not find the opening quote particularly relevant to the topic at hand.

The article could benefit from a more clear and precise opening paragraph. While two native languages are immidiately mentioned, it continues to talk about a third, Tsimshian, that is not native. A greater focus on native languages first, and then additional languages or variations could make this page more clear.

There is also a lack of transitions that makes the information choppy.

When speaking about the American colonization, I saw some places where grammar could be improved. For example, a lack of commas in the appropriate spots is evident.

There is a lack of consistency with capitalizing "Native Alaskan."

The page is predominantly informed by the work of Michael Krauss. Additional sources and diversification may better the page.