User:Khiggin1/Drug rehabilitation/Angb2015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Khiggin1)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Khiggin1/Drug_rehabilitation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Drug rehabilitation

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that this is a clear and concise draft, but it needs more work. The author had some great points when talking about the various characteristics of the Recovery Model, but did not go into much detail about them. Also, the author only had one citation which is concerning because it seems as though there's not much validity. For the most part, I think the author managed to keep a neutral tone throughout their contribution. I think they could improve this article by going into detail about each characteristics of the Recovery Model and how it helps patients manage their substance abuse day to day.