User:Khiya04/Clostridium perfringens/Ebathens Peer Review

General info
C. perfringens
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Khiya04/Clostridium_perfringens?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Clostridium perfringens

Evaluate the drafted changes
Major Toxins:


 * "intoxicated"- Although this may be technically correct vocab word, other words may have a better way of addressing the concept.
 * be careful with wording, although technically correct on several phrases, the tone may be improved with more generalized/ more direct phrasing with words when paraphrasing from sources
 * "necrotizing enteritis and enterotoxaemia" - it may be beneficial to link these to their pages as well for a better understanding for the reader just in case. (infinity appearing button)
 * "This causes the destruction of the cells cytoskeleton which in turn leads to the death of the cell as it can no longer maintain homeostasis"

Genome:


 * "allowed techniques' such as microbial source tracking (MST)' to identify food contamination sources" - if you would like more to add, elaboration on what these food contamination sources are could provide a way to add more information
 * "Clostridium perfringens has a stable G+C content around 27–28% and average genome size of 3.5 Mb. Genomes of 56 C. perfringens strains have since been made available on NCBI genomes database for the scientific research community. Genomic research has revealed surprisingly high diversity in C. perfringens pangenome, with only 12.6% core genes, identified as the most divergent Gram-positive bacteria reported. Nevertheless, 16S rRNA regions in between C. perfringens strains are found to be highly conserved (sequence identity >99.1%)." - in this section, I do not see a reference cited

Within the title labeled motility:


 * There are only 2 links for a large portion of information, maybe try added a few citations to back this information or finding the specific details you pulled and linking those.
 * A better title for motility may be appearance or identifiable structures and having a motility section of this for a more broad central topic of a section.
 * "according to video imaging of their gliding motion"- what video? How do you know this? Maybe a citation of a video image of these may be useful.
 * "had 10 and 6 nucleotide polymorphisms (SNPs) in comparison to their parent strains."- how many SNP's did the parents have. SNP's are genomic variation at a single base pairing in DNA. How did they have 10 and 6? Or was it at positions 10 and 6?
 * "The hypermotile strains have the common trait of gene mutations related to cell division"- what mutation is this referring to? The position changes?