User:Khushipdesai/Gender inequality in India/Kding20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Khushipdesai


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Khushipdesai/Gender inequality in India
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender inequality in India

Evaluate the drafted changes
The issue of gender inequality is a huge social problem. A lot of details have been added in the texts, and the blindspot of witchcraft has also been mentioned. The addition has made the article as a whole more contextualized with the story. The texts have made the article more complete, and with the specific statistics the article is now more persuasive than before. Maybe you can make a new section for witchcraft hunting influences will be more specific for the reader.