User:Khushipdesai/Gender inequality in India/Laura21hg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Khushipdesai


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Khushipdesai/Gender inequality in India
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender inequality in India

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been adapted because the changes that this student intends to introduce in this Wikipedia article are minor and they do not affect the overall content of the article.

As for the content, it is both up-to-date and relevant for the article in question because it includes statistical data about the literacy rate in India, as well as about domestic violence. The topic addresses the situation of gender inequality in India so it is considered to be one of Wikipedia's equity gaps regarding underrepresented communities, in this case, women. Moreover, the content was added in a neutral and informative way, without a clear bias on a particular position. The information about gender inequality in India was included in a way that did not attempt to persuade the reader of a certain opinion, and instead, it just presented objective evidence about this topic.

All sources are also up-to-data because they were all published in the last years and they all come from reliable and objective authors. The only exception could be the fourth source, as it was published in 2010 and the data might not be still accurate for the current situation in India.

The content is concise, coherent and concrete, as well as free from any spelling or grammatical errors. My general opinion is that this article meets all Wikipedia's required guidelines and it will be a positive and beneficial addition to the article and the Wikipedia community as a whole.