User:Kian.Mohamadi/Kocher manoeuvre/Dmvela Peer Review

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kian.mohamadi
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I like what you have so far! It is definitely easy to read and I think the reading level would be appropriate for a lot of people.

One suggestion I would have would be switching "this study" from the last sentence to something like "this summary."

I also wonder if there needs to be more information on Jordan's initial ideas for this maneuver if they were important for Kocher's development of this procedure.