User:Kiessence/Madea/Alicia.m3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kiessence and KH35F


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Madea
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Madea

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead does not seem to be recently updated to reflect the new content added by my classmates. It includes a introductory sentence that talks about Madea and her personality. It also talks about what films the character is in and the content of those films. The lead is concise and gets directly to the point. The content remains relevant to the topic as it talks about Madea's fictional background, the movies she has been in, and who has played her. The criticism section talks about the black communities, a historically underrepresented group, reaction to this character. Many see it as a mockery to the black community as she plays into black sterotypes. The article uses mostly reliable peer reviewed sources, but there are some subjective sources. An example of a subjective source is when they reference TV Guide. However, the sources are thorough and what is cited is accurate to the article referenced. The article is well organized in sections and even has a chart to help the reader better understand who played what characters in Madea movies. Since there is only one well captioned image I do believe there could be more images. The tone is neutral through out this article and all view points are displayed. This can be seen with the section about the criticism of the Madea character. The article includes both the view of people who criticized Tyler Perry for Madea and Perry's response to the criticism. While I am sure my peers are still working on the article, it doesn't seem like they have added to much to it. Therefore, the strength of the content added is very minimal.