User:Kiianamariiee/Brain size/Lrodr053 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Kiianamariie)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kiianamariiee/Brain_size?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brain size

Evaluate the drafted changes
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 * 1) I think you need to add a "Guiding Question" to help give you topics that will allow you to further discuss the evolution of the brain. I would also suggest looking at the bottom of the current version bibliography as they can help give you many topics to form your "guiding questions"
 * 2) My critique on the article is that for the Human and Variation/Evolution section could use more information to connect humans and their past ancestors revolving the change around the human brain evolution and intelligence
 * 3) I would also say that for the article the intro paragraph needs to be edited to relate to the main topic, because it does not really relate to the evolution of the brain and humans.
 * 4) I think for the intelligence section it could use improvements revolving the brain regions that rapidly developed and how the skull changed and grew over time to support the brains newly developed regions.
 * 5) If possible I would try to add more pictures with the new information,
 * 6) Add information explaining the "trends in hominin brain size evolution"