User:Kikisolo/Hamar people/Alternativenonfacist Peer Review

General info
Kikisolo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kikisolo/Hamar_people?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Hamar people

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are no changes drafted in the sandbox. I would recommend looking into the history of the Hamar people, since all there is on the initial article is culture and demography. It definitely is worth expanding on the culture section of the article, as there is only one tradition/ritual mentioned. That's really all I can recommend so far.