User:Kimchi Hart/16 and Pregnant/Iya5678 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kimchi Hart


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kimchi%20Hart/16_and_Pregnant?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 16 and Pregnant

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I don't see any suggested edits yet, but I can suggest some. I would suggest adding some information about the women on the show, and maybe about how they are doing now? That could be interesting. Additionally, more pictures and more links could be easy edits. Good luck!