User:King-Joma/Ataxia/Bsb018 Peer Review

General info
King-Joma
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:King-Joma/Ataxia:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ataxia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)