User:KingRice27/Russian Mafia/Thrushy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KingRice27


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KingRice27/Russian_Mafia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Russian mafia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In the lead the first sentence could be improved by describing Russian mafia instead of jumping right into the history. Some of the info in the lead can be used in the history to make the lead less detailed.

"Unlike the Italian mafias, with their capofamiglia, or the Chinese triads" in this you could give a link for the Italian mafia so readers would have a better understanding of what you are trying to compare.

Maybe add the difference between a gulag and a prison. Overall, well detailed and good information added to the article. Minor details could use some work to help improve the information, but I wouldn't change, much.