User:Kingflyp/Fisher-Price/Fgsalas Peer Review

General info
Kingflyp
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kingflyp/Fisher-Price - Wikipedia:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fisher-Price - Wikipedia:

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article could benefit from more details about the sustainability programs and initiatives that Mattel is implementing would enhance the article. Also, including an discussion about potential environmental impact of these initiatives would help readers understand the significance of Mattel's efforts in combating climate change.

Furthermore, it would also help providing a balanced view by acknowledging any criticisms or challenges associated with these initiatives. You could maybe address potential criticisms demonstrating a nuanced understanding of the topic and add depth to the article.

Lastly, your article would benefit from expanding more on the steps fisher-price/Mattel is taking to formulate their sustainability program.