User:Kira-g.w.w./Social Amoeba Evolution/AMaizing2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Kira Gibbs


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kira-g.w.w./Social Amoeba Evolution


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Kira-g.w.w./Social Amoeba Evolution

Evaluate the drafted changes
This was a great lead section, easy to grasp and detailed. The lead is concise and still discusses the sections detailed in the article without being repetitive. The images added are simple and clean, good. I like the organization of this article and that you expanded the last section. Overall, this article flows well due to your layout and had good content to support itself...I would go back through the comments for the first sections just to clear up any odd phrasing of structural hiccups. Great work! This was easy to read and highly informative with a clear neutral tone.