User:Kira-g.w.w./Social Amoeba Evolution/Lsmith44 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kira-g.w.w.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kira-g.w.w./Social_Amoeba_Evolution/Lsmith44_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I thought that the content of this article was really good! The subject was interesting and I thought that Kira did a good job of keeping that up throughout the article. I found the information to be presented in a way that it was easy for me to understand and the article flowed well. There was a generous amount of references used in this article so that shows us that the information is reliable. The only thing I might change about this article is moving the first section 'Evolution of Social Amoeba' to the lead section area. I think that's what you meant to do; Wikipedia sandboxes are hard to format! Other than that, I thought this was a strong article and gave good information about the topic you're covering!