User:Kirasbeans/Uranium mining and the Navajo people/Cmoliva14 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

kirabeans


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Kirasbeans/Uranium mining and the Navajo people


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Uranium mining and the Navajo people

Lead

 * Very clear and concise lead, I was able to see what edits you plan to make and know what came originally from the article.
 * Lead is missing a few sections on the major areas of this article an introductory sentence describing the articles topic.

Content

 * Really important and interesting topic to cover! The edits you made whether to include or not include sections and your additional information on environmental implication on food and overall the basic needs of the Navajo community being added flows very well with the original article sections.

Tone and Balence

 * Tone of paper sounds neutral with no underlying bias.
 * The articles you had included are peer reviewed articles and are articulate in your section clearly.

Sources/References

 * Did not see if you have linked your sources to your section yet, but looks like you'll be able to incorporate them and are relevant to the section you are working on.

Organization

 * Overall great start and easy to follow sections, the organization of this article so far is easy to follow and I am able to see what will be taken out or left in the articles as well as your additional edits.