User:Kirasbeans/Uranium mining and the Navajo people/SJLupine Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kirasbeans


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kirasbeans/Uranium_mining_and_the_Navajo_people?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Uranium mining and the Navajo people

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you are really on the right track and the tone of the article seems to me as very neutral and not leaning toward any one direction, which is good. I do think it would be a good idea to add some new paragraphs, (like what you were saying in your own notes) such as uranium in groundwater. I think that it would overall help the flow rather than just adding it randomly within a paragraph.

I guess something that you could add or look into if you have time is if there are any efforts toward cleaning up the water or if the Nation is doing anything. That might be some helpful information to add.