User:KirstenBiefeld/Lake Titicaca/Eitamh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KirstenBiefeld


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 *  https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:KirstenBiefeld/Lake_Titicaca&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no 
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Titicaca - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Overall, you did a really good job with this article. For the lead, I would just make sure that it's not repetitive once you incorporate it into the original article since the original already talks about this lake being the "highest navigable lake" in the world. Your references look good, the links work, and I like that you were able to use some sources from 2021. Your article is organized really well and you did a good job of defining some terms you used, such as endorheic basin in the second paragraph. I found one typo in the third paragraph; Pacific "coat" should be "coast" I believe.

The only thing you still have to add is more info about recent studies done on the lake, which you started to do at the end with the Escurra et al. paper.

Good job, this article looks like a real Wikipedia article!