User:KirstenBiefeld/Lake Titicaca/Wiki limno Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KirstenBiefeld


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KirstenBiefeld/Lake_Titicaca?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Titicaca

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Kirsten, Lizzy here. Good job on the first draft, you hit the word count and reference requirement. Here are my suggestions going forward:

Intro; because the wiki page that you are adding to has a pretty developed introduction- I think this short one you have is fine. Body- I would change this heading to "Limnological Background and Research" it will flow better when you publish it within the larger article. Great use of links and references. The biggest thing you need to address for the final version is adding examples of research that has taken place on the lake into your findings. Let us know if you have any questions.