User:KirstenSW821/Neanderthal anatomy/Fable1119 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KirstenSW821


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:KirstenSW821/Neanderthal anatomy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Neanderthal anatomy

Evaluate the drafted changes
The work put into this is phenomenal. The way that the wiki writer has flowed their additions into the existing article is so much more natural than just a blunt new article, very well done. The voice and tone of the article is unbiased and is written in a way that makes it easy and fun to read and the amount of sources provided on top of what was already there is amazing. The organization is clean and a thorough layout has been made and followed and while no pictures are in the draft, I imagine they will be added later on. Final thoughts, the writer worked very hard on their topic and enjoyed doing so, they have done great.

ps. so sorry about the very late review. You have done awesome, and you made it to the end of class, yay!