User:Kirsty Chai/Marriage in modern China/Finndb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kirsty Chain


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kirsty%20Chai/Marriage_in_modern_China?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marriage in modern China
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marriage in modern China
 * Marriage in modern China

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article subsection on the status of late marriage in modern China has a very strong introduction, quickly introducing the content and providing good context for the subject. The following two paragraphs flow well together but are too brief to justify being paragraphs of their own. Both could benefit from citations leading to external articles for readers to learn more about certain topics mentioned within, such as the 'reverse hypergamy' which is talked about as existing within China.

The second subheader on Cui Hun is a very good length and provides lots of great additional information on the subject. The statistics, however, all need citations added to them, and I would suggest providing some context in between them, as when I was reading the article I wasnt sure what to think of some of the statistics or how they fit in.