User:Kirsty Chai/Marriage in modern China/Ksomo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Kirsty Chai)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kirsty Chai/Marriage in modern China


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marriage in modern China

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added relevant to the topic and up-to-date. The content seems neutral enough for me. But this content uses a lot of data, lack of adding new sources

Overall this context is well- written and clear for their article, but the main defect is lack of the support without adding the reliable data resources.