User:Kiydal/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Nursing- occupational hazards section:The Occupational hazards section of this article makes no mention of hazards related to patient handling which is a gross oversight. :
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Option 2

 * Occupational Medicine:
 * Article Evaluation
 * The introductory sentence is pretty good. The rest of the lead is rather rambling and in my opinion does not provide a clear overview of occupational medicine. Also it pretty completely neglects the environmental component of occupational medicine. The article is missing a lot of content and there are grammatical errors and sentence fragments. Also one of the sources is an interview with an occupational medicine physician which may not qualify as a good source. :
 * Sources:Ladou, Current Occupational & Environmental Medicine, McGraw Hill:https://acoem.org/Why-OEM/Why-Choose-a-Career-in-OEM

Option 3

 * Workplace Safety in Healthcare settings
 * Article Evaluation:Does not have a section on patient handling which is one of the main hazards in the healthcare setting. This needs to be included.
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Option 5

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Feedback from instructors[edit | edit source]
All excellent choices. You probably do not need to work on all of them. Whenever data on rates of a health outcome exist (prevalence, incidence) and are missing and you can find it, please try to add it. TMorata (talk) 19:41, 2 February 2024 (UTC)